Friday, June 23, 2017

Laying down the law


Lay down the rules
of the ground
on the ground.

Draw lines
on both sides of the ruler:
the line they cannot cross,
and the line you will not.

Observe
the two lines
Separated
by a space
As
flat and fat like a ruler,

as
Fat and flat like a ruler.


a poem after a long while, and perhaps not a very good one, 
but still a start.

3 comments:

Dan said...

It is a good one. I had to read it several times to understand it. Although there is a possibility that I read a different meaning into it than what you would have wanted to put forth.

I should have taken your email id today! Now I can only wish that you check the comments section and tell me your version.

c said...

Hey Dan
No deeper meaning. just a poem on setting boundaries, like drawing a line with a ruler or laying down the law/rules like a ruler. Play of words

Dan said...

I really like this part:

Draw lines
on both sides of the ruler:
the line they cannot cross,
and the line you will not.